最近收到很多考托們的來信，其中問的最多的問題就是托福寫作為什么拿不到高分?今天，小編就幫大家整理了托福寫作中最常見的22個失分點。你的寫作，是不是也踩到地雷了呢?

　　1.結構不平行

　　例子：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.

　　將一系列的單詞連接起來的時候，應當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。

　　2.不知所云

　　例子：Many companies began using computers mouth.

　　3.段落過長，不分段，主語與動詞一致問題

　　例子：She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.

　　主語和動詞不一致。

　　4.句子別扭

　　例子：We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.

　　措辭過長或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。

　　5.拼寫錯誤主語、動詞或賓語有問題

　　例子：I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.

　　句子的基本結構有問題，缺少主語、動詞或賓語，或者這些成分重復。

　　6.語氣與文章不符

　　例子：I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.

　　語氣與文章其他部分不相符，可能是過于正式或者太不正式。

　　7.代詞指代不明

　　例子：If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.

　　代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。

　　8.過于籠統

　　例子：We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.

　　句子或者所表達的意思過于籠統，不能提供多少信息。

　　9.動詞時態錯誤

　　例子：Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.

　　動詞時態不正確，檢查一下是應該用現在時、過去時、將來時或者是完成時等等。

　　10.介詞多余

　　例子：I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.

　　在表示這種意思時此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown，home，there，here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。

　　11.跑題或不相關

　　例子：There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個與okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達的意思很普通，大多數人都已經知道了，因而就沒有必要再說出來。

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